Dead Hours — Points, Page 1
By Suha · Published
Transcript
Scene: The quiet interior of a 24-hour convenience store deep in the night, fluorescent lights humming, an empty street visible through the front windows. A night-shift nurse in rumpled scrubs, hair in a messy bun and a tote bag on her shoulder, walks toward the register holding a travel coffee cup. Behind the counter stands Kaito (name tag KAITO), deadpan and tired. Rin (name tag RIN) leans nearby, scrolling her phone, bored. NURSE: Just the coffee.
Image description
Wide night shot of a 24-hour convenience store. A tired nurse in scrubs walks up to the counter holding a coffee cup while Kaito waits behind the register and Rin scrolls her phone nearby.
About this chapter
A night-shift nurse just wants a coffee, but her loyalty card is one point short of a free one. Kaito — physically unable to let a near-miss stand — spirals into engineering absurd micro-purchases to farm that single missing point, each one costing more than the coffee itself, while Rin films the math getting worse. He finally hits 1,000 points in triumph... and the coffee machine is empty. He hand-brews a fresh pot; the nurse's shift alarm goes off and she bolts, leaving the hard-won coffee untouched on the counter. Rin's stream wins. Kaito gets nothing.