Dead Hours을(를) 계속 읽으려면 로그인하세요
The Intruder의 18페이지 중 3페이지를 읽었어요. 나머지를 읽으려면 로그인하거나 무료 Inkroost 계정을 만드세요. 금방 끝나고 사이트의 다른 모든 무료 챕터도 열려요.
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3 A.M. Kaito has just finished cleaning the dead-hours store to a spotless, silent perfection — and then a single fly gets in through the sliding doors. Unable to tolerate the one flaw in his immaculate kingdom, he arms himself with a tightly rolled blank flyer and declares total war on the intruder, even as Rin flatly points out the doors will simply open at dawn and let it out on its own. Across the shift the fly evades every swing, lands on a salaryman mid-swat, shrugs off the tracksuit regular's absurd advice, and drives Kaito into an existential spiral about the single imperfection in his perfect world — each failed attempt landing on the same dead-eyed beat of Kaito frozen with his weapon raised. Rin films all of it as 'Man vs Fly,' with one flicker of near-sincerity before going back to her phone. Near dawn Kaito finally, calmly corners the fly against the cooler glass with a serene smile for the first time all night... and the morning-delivery doors slide open, and the fly drifts out into the dawn on its own, exactly as Rin promised. Kaito gets nothing; Rin's six-hour stream wins the internet. He stands in the spotless daylight store, right where he began — and a second fly drifts in through the open door.
1페이지
Establishing shot from the sliding doors looking down the bright, empty aisles of a convenience store at 3 A.M., a dark street outside the windows. Kaito, in his striped store apron with a KAITO name tag, stands in the middle of the aisle holding a cleaning cloth, quietly pleased with the immaculate store. Rin, in a hoodie under her apron with a RIN name tag, leans on the register in the background, absorbed in her phone. Kaito: ...Perfect.
2페이지
Panel 1: Close on Kaito's content face as one small black fly buzzes in near his head. Panel 2: Kaito's head snaps around, eyes wide, locked onto the fly now resting on an empty shelf. Kaito: ...A fly. Panel 3: Rin at the register, not looking up from her phone; Kaito stands rigid behind her. Rin: Doors open at six. It'll leave on its own. Kaito: It's in my store.
3페이지
Panel 1: Kaito tightly rolls a blank paper flyer into a slim baton, his resolve hardening. Kaito: Not on my shift. Panel 2: He brandishes the rolled flyer upright like a sword. Kaito: This store is a sealed system. One flaw. One. Panel 3: Rin raises her phone to film him, smirking. Rin: Going live. 'Man versus Fly.' Panel 4: Extreme close-up of a single housefly calmly grooming its legs on the edge of a shelf, oblivious.