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Dead Hours — The Short Leg, 9페이지

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Six panels. The sliding doors open and a drunk salaryman enters — flushed face, loosened tie, rumpled white shirt, jacket over one arm. He waves a lazy hand. SALARYMAN: It's not the stool. He gestures grandly at the whole floor, swaying. SALARYMAN: It's the FLOOR. Whole place tilts. He flops heavily onto the wooden stool to demonstrate; it rocks hard with big motion lines. Kaito lunges forward with both hands out. KAITO: Please do not— The salaryman rocks gleefully on the stool; Kaito is horrified and dead-eyed; Rin films with a tiny smirk. SALARYMAN: See? Tilts! KAITO: You are making it worse.

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Dense six-panel scene: a drunk salaryman insists the floor tilts, flops onto the stool and rocks it hard while Kaito tries to stop him and Rin films.

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3 A.M., rain on the dead-hours store. Kaito's backless four-legged counter stool develops a wobble — it rocks on a diagonal, one leg forever a hair off the floor. Unable to work the dead shift perched on something that will not sit level, Kaito declares quiet war on the wobble and resolves to make the stool sit dead flat before dawn, spiraling over which of four legs is the short one — a thing nobody can verify, because it rocks a new way every time it is pressed. All night he presses a palm flat on the seat, watches one foot lift, and mutters the same dead-eyed beat: '...still.' He shims the legs with folded cardboard, a coin, a bottle cap — each shim only walks the rock to a fresh corner. A ladder of regulars each deliver a verdict nobody can verify: the tracksuit regular says it's rocked for years, sit still and it settles; a drunk salaryman swears it's the FLOOR that tilts and drops onto it to 'test,' rocking it worse; a cheerful jogger insists all four legs are fine and it's Kaito himself who's uneven. He flips the stool, measures the legs, waits out head office's hold line, while Rin livestreams the vigil as 'Man vs Stool — 6 Hours,' with one flicker of near-sincerity before raising her phone again. Near dawn, hollow, Kaito finally stops fighting, sits without bracing — and the stool holds dead still, the running beat inverting into a serene '...level.' Then the reveal Rin planted at ten o'clock pays off: she folded one flat gum wrapper under a single foot on camera and slipped it back out the instant he gave up. His six-hour war leveled nothing; the stool was fine the whole time. Rin takes the perfect stool and sits on it dead still, filming her outro, while Kaito is left standing. Dawn fills the spotless store exactly as the night began — and by the second register the other stool gives one soft rock on its own, Rin's phone already raised, already live.