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Swipe Left on Mr. Darcy — Are You Sure?, Page 2

By Suha · Published

Four panels in the warm Bennet front hall: Mrs. Bennet holds forth about wedding plans at the foot of the stairs with Lydia and Kitty, while Lizzie slips in the front door unnoticed and looks quietly up the staircase.

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Panel 1. The narrow front hall under warm lamplight, the staircase rising on the right. Mrs. Bennet stands at the foot of it mid-declaration, delighted, in her rose-and-cream floral blouse and amber bead necklace. Lydia sits on the stairs and Kitty leans over the banister above her, both grinning. MRS. BENNET: Four bridesmaids. Five, if she listens to me. Panel 2. Lizzie eases the dark front door shut behind her, still in her olive jacket, eyes down, a small secret smile. Panel 3. Mrs. Bennet half-turns toward her without really looking and waves her along, already back to Lydia. MRS. BENNET: Lizzie, don't just stand there. Panel 4. Low angle from the foot of the stairs. Lizzie looks up the staircase, calm and entirely unheard, the noise of the hall behind her. LIZZIE (thought): Not to her. Not tonight.

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Four panels in the warm Bennet front hall: Mrs. Bennet holds forth about wedding plans at the foot of the stairs with Lydia and Kitty, while Lizzie slips in the front door unnoticed and looks quietly up the staircase.

About this chapter

Lizzie comes home from the leafy lane engaged to the one man nobody in that house would believe she could want, and discovers the hardest part is not saying yes: it is being believed. Jane laughs, certain it is a joke, until the whole reordered story comes out in the dark of their bedroom, and asks the one question Lizzie has never let herself answer out loud. The next morning Darcy is at the front door in his charcoal overcoat asking, of all people, for her father. Behind a closed living-room door two men have a conversation Lizzie is not in, while her mother speculates about lawsuits and Mary offers wisdom nobody requested. Then it is her turn, and Mr. Bennet, dry and unbothered for twenty-two chapters, is not dry at all: he wants to know whether his sharpest daughter has sold herself to a rich man she cannot respect. So Lizzie tells him everything, including the part that was never hers to tell, and says the words she has never once said about anybody. Her father takes off his glasses. Downstairs, Mrs. Bennet goes silent for three unprecedented seconds before the house detonates, and the chapter closes where it opened: the same porch steps at golden hour, except she is not walking up them alone.