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Swipe Left on Mr. Darcy — A Fine Pair of Eyes, Page 5

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Panel 1: Caroline, elegant and calculating, studies Darcy over a coffee cup while he remains stiff in the cool lounge. Caroline: "And Miss Elizabeth?" Panel 2: Darcy turns slightly, brows drawn, denying interest too quickly against the glass background. Darcy: "Barely worth mentioning." Panel 3: Caroline smiles thinly, recognizing the crack in his composure. Caroline: "Yet you mentioned her." Story function: Caroline identifies the first sign that Lizzie has stayed in Darcy's mind, even before Darcy can admit it to himself.

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Caroline studies Darcy over coffee and probes him about Elizabeth, noticing that his denial comes too quickly.

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The morning after the assembly, Lizzie turns Darcy’s insult into the Bennet family’s favorite joke while Jane tries to protect her first fragile hope about Bingley. Across town at Netherfield, Darcy insists he is unmoved, but Caroline notices him repeating Lizzie’s name. The chapter pivots from public insult to private curiosity: Lizzie refuses to be diminished, Jane quietly hopes, and Darcy realizes her laughter has followed him home.